Wake Up

I'm not trying to be motivational

These lines are no more than recreational

I'm not trying to stage a major break through

But of course that should be up to you

Get up right now and get it done

'Cause this moment is soon to be gone

Don't worry about its ephemeral nature

A second is all it takes

For a life changing decision to be made

Give the butterfly effect something to work with

Trust me

You don't want your day's peak to be a record by aerosmith

So just go ahead

Leave that metaphorical bed

Tear its matress up

To avoid relapses, they sure suck

 

Anyhow,

    

       The best of luck.

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

I liked the rhythms and the message. Nothing's worse then regret in life. Say what you mean and mean what you say. Very enjoyable read.

[Kimiko Watson]

Great choice of words this piece is on a beat. This is some high level of motivation my friend. Continue writing you have a wonderful talent.

[Chip Murison]

Really nice. I love the idea of tearing the mattress up. I'm with you 100%. Write on!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I liked the energy and the drive of the poetry.
"Get up right now and get it done
'Cause this moment is soon to be gone
Don't worry about its ephemeral nature
A second is all it takes"
The above lines true and needed daily. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ashwin Shanker]

A waking call with a lot of rhyming words.
I felt at some places that it was a bit forced. Maybe that is my opinion. I liked how you ended the whole thing though.

Best of luck :P

[hypochondrita]

I feel the same really. the aerosmith part makes me cringe a bit but I wanted the rhymes lol

[Giulia King]

This was like a push on my back. I really needed it :)

[hypochondrita]

Glad to hear it.

[wordman]

and it was a great motivational speech,and with rythum

[Isabella Ivy]

This sounds like a rap song to me and the wording is smart. A success :) Thank you for letting me read your work. I.I.

[hypochondrita]

wow hahah now I just can't read it anymore without hearing a rap melody in the background

[Isabella Ivy]

It was not your influence? Oh, no! I'd be curious to know if I'm the only one that heard it that way :) I.I.

[hypochondrita]

Not really. I'm flattered though, good to know rapping is now on the table