Point Of No Return

As the ghost of interior death

I now proclaim everything you possess

Please sit and enjoy the last you'll ever feel

While I explain the nature of our deal.

If the balance of your life

Weights in on the negative side

Well, there is your first win

Situations that harm others

Will no longer affect you within.

 

However,

If a happy reality used to take place

You might wanna start agonizing in disgrace

'Cause fulfilment won't ever come from your actions

Which will lead to a mirror struck by an unknown reflection.

With the two possible scenarios on the table

The off button is no longer available

Your emotions are done being a compromise

Congratulations, you're officially dead inside.

Reviews

[Tracey K. Rogers]

Love this piece. All of your pieces are truly amazing ans beautiful. keep writing these great pieces.

[hypochondrita]

Thank you, it means a lot.

[Tikaani Sgaan]

Deep and truly expressive. You're a fantastic writer. All of your work sends shivers down my spine. Beautiful.

-T

[hypochondrita]

ahhhh! thank you for the kind words, glad to know it makes you feel something.

[D Connolly]

Spooky! This reminds me of a Supernatural episode, making deals with demons and losing your soul :)

[hypochondrita]

interesting to know u think that... maybe i should pull some strings and get myself a job

[Victoriana]

I really like and can relate, good work!

[hypochondrita]

Thank you, darling :)

[Hebe]

Damn! sorry no pun intended, but this is good!!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem had the feel of the deal with the Devil. When someone wants to steal everything from us. We best run for the hills. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hypochondrita]

Glad to hear the message followed what I had in mind. Thanks for the feedback! Your profile pic is cool.

[Coyote Poetry]

Me and my grand-boys in the photo and you are welcome.

[wordman]

well,this is certainly something to think about !