Have you ever wondered?

this is a poem i made up... kinda how im feeling

 

Have you ever wondered what it would be like....

To be a flower with beautiful wings

or a duck swimming in a pond

or the rain freely falling from the sky

I have...

Have you ever wondered what teh world would be like...

If there was no more war

or if there was never to be another sickness

or if all depressing and painful days were gone

i have...

Have you ever wondered what its like...

To feel weak

or unwanted

or to have to wake up ever day wondering who you really are?

I havent...

 

Author's Note

ignore all grammar problems.... what do you think?

Reviews

[ebur™]

i think this was a great poem, it really showed alot of emotion. it was written well, as in the format and the way you wrote it, (besides the grammar problems) ;). great job! :)