Mother Nature
A Poem by Hannah
 a short, sad poem 
Mother nature cried, Her tears shaped like rain. Her harmonious earth, Burdened with such pain.
© 2016 Hannah
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Mother earth has been through a lot in her 4.54 billion years. Over time, she's formed the countries we now have, been hit with ateroids, suffered through earthquakes, hurricanes, tidal waves and more.
Man has only been here a very short time but manages to put filth into the air and seas. Even with all she's been through, I don't think mother nature is happy about that at all.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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Very nice!
Short and simple with a tinge of sadness.
Nice work.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Mother earth has been through a lot in her 4.54 billion years. Over time, she's formed the countries we now have, been hit with ateroids, suffered through earthquakes, hurricanes, tidal waves and more.
Man has only been here a very short time but manages to put filth into the air and seas. Even with all she's been through, I don't think mother nature is happy about that at all.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Very short, nice rhyme structure
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 29, 2016
Last Updated on November 29, 2016
Tags: earth, mother nature, burden, pain, crying, wind, rain, sun, leaves, poetry, sad, short poems, short, meaningful, tears, life
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Hannah United Kingdom
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My name is Hannah and I'm a student from the UK.
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