Love's Forever Eternity

 

Shall we, too, rise forgetful from our sleep,
And shall my soul that lies within your hand
Remember nothing, as the blowing sand
Forgets the palm where long blue shadows creep
When winds along the darkened desert sweep?

Or would it still remember, tho' it spanned
A thousand heavens, while the planets fanned
The vacant ether with their voices deep?
Soul of my soul, no word shall be forgot,
Nor yet alone, beloved, shall we see

 The desolation of extinguished suns,
Nor fear the void wherethro' our planet runs,
For still together shall we go and not
Fare forth alone to front eternity
 

Reviews

[Kathryn]

Very nice piece. Very mature writing and diction; very unique style and structure. Rhyming was good and not forced, which was refreshing. Well done, keep writing.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Nice.

This is a beautiful poem, well organized, structurally sound
and flows nicely.

You demonstrate a fine command of the language.
Excellent writing.

=------Eagle Cruagh