Wind

Its all about the wind that reminds him of the feeling that he had for a girl. He wishes to forget the details of her loss so as to find again the wind charming.

 

  

Chilled breeze  with frozen words,
Whiffs my conscience embedded with pain,so eloquent.

Forsaken,withered ,diminished by the winds of time;
Lies a heart that has love no more,
a mind that flies no more;
Flew it once in avalanche of love;
With wings of wax,one melted by warmth;
That are wings no more, flies no more. 

Forget,if I could the loss of you;
Elate my senses,and dance to
the tune of wind,psalm of life it sings;
But soon on me the cognizance fell,
Ooze through the happiness unreal,tears yell;
For what is the wind that has that tune no more,and sings no more.

Reviews

[Shelly Braen]

I feel my heart sob, such longing, such pain. The cold winds do blow, and can carry much away, but this beauty you find, it is forever, as, unfortunately, are the memories. Your words simply break my heart, yet I return again and again to feel with you. The wind carries in some things most precious, yet seems to carry them away as quickly as begotten, yet do not lose hope, for as sure as the wind does howl, the wind will sing again. Gorgeous, breathtaking, sorrowful, powerful write.

[hussain]

Thank you shelly !

[dunnia]

very nice....i can feel the sadness this poem gives off while reading