Memories

It was the first time in my life that things were so clear to me,
 Beyond any shadows of confusion you were shining bright;
You were all there for me to acquire I thought,
Only the first time my insight never fought;
It changed so lot in me, an idea of discipline it involved in me;
I enjoyed the very state it was hardly thought to go so far.
Started admiring the way you were and thought it at every moment spare.
 The moment of separation kept me awake, before I go I have so much to make. Words you talked created a mountain of memories, each time I climbed I found your face.

Reviews

[Ardra]

The moment of separation kept me awake......love this line.... it's true the thought of losing the one you love is worst fear one can have...it can leave with sleepless nights .... enjoyed reading your creation

[hussain]

love separation and sleeplessness .......the cycle continues. Thanks for the review my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Strong description allowed the reader to feel the emotion and be brought into good memories and thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[hussain]

Thanks for the review glad you liked it.

[Shelly Braen]

Such love and adoration, yet such regret. The heart never forgets, but still the heart continues to beat. How beloved and dear. I admire this piece. Such sad affection. Beautiful and so much of a loving embrace. Wonderful!

[hussain]

sad affection, very true. Thanks