A PLACE TO BE

a perfect place

Where time and space has lost its meaning, bending the way I wish.

Where,a child for my mother 

and a charming man for my beloved at the same time I be

Where as a child my pocket was filled with things,

with cards coins magnets and strings

Where I vanish into the painting to find thee

And in a mellifluous  garden you lie beside me

Where all my favorite places are clustered together,

And I don't need no transport and I travel free.

Where just outside my class is the house of you,

and through window I leap for you view

Where in the orchard you go up in a swing.

Up till you find the sky so wide and blue

and down to wonder the grass so green.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Beautiful. Loved the second stanza above all. I liked the imagery as well. Nice to read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, kind and beautiful use of words.
"Where I vanish into the painting to find thee
And in a mellifluous garden you lie beside me"
I enjoyed the complete poem but the above lines were my favorite. Life can seem like a painting we are create. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote