I'll endure the silence, I'll endure the cold, I'll endure the silence, If i may be so bold. I'll stand by your side, I'll stand through the fights, I'll stand by your side, All through those sleepless nights. I just wanted you to know, how much I care, I just wanted you to know, And hope these feelings you will someday share
Like I stated with your other poem, sometimes the poems that state the least are the ones that say the most.
Personally I really like this poem.
I love how short, simple, but absolutely amazing it sounds.
I like how you repeated the important lines and worked around those. It brings up a few choice memories of mine, and I feel I can really relate to it.