One track mind

One track mind

A Poem by huntnteen

The one track mind,
comes to a crossroads,
with no sign to find.
The one thought soul,
switches emotions,
feeling another pull.
The unchangeable man,
takes a road,
he never knew he can.
Changes come and go,
the unchangable yield,
to the thoughts they didnt know.

© 2010 huntnteen


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OTM has HOPE running all thru it. It really accents the notion that
change is a learning process that hopefully we all will surrender to.
Crossroads are inevitable and to open our minds to new things is
a very positive thing. And Hunt, you nail that, superbly.
Kudos
LLR
PS: Suggestion: use "could" instead of can in line 9

Posted 14 Years Ago



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