Lost

I wander around looking for truth,
yet i am lost,
I cry out when i feel you near,
yet you are lost.
I search to counsel my mind,
yet i am lost.
I lose you to the winds and follow,
yet you are lost.
I chase after you to the end,
yet i am lost.
I try to tell you how much i care,
yet you are lost.
My emotions steer me towards you,
Yet I am lost.
My mind struggles to claim you,
yet you are lost.
I follow you in the shadows,
yet i am lost.
You control me without knowing,
yet you are lost.
Until i have you,
I am lost.
Until you see me,
you are lost.

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is how i feel.....lost..... good write

[Katrina Mckeown]

I can relate well to this excellantly written Piece of poetry! Thank-you for sharing this piece! :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. Each line made the story more sad and desperate. We need to be seen and needed.
Coyote