Distance

well it describes the situation i am in with my girlfriend quite nicely

I hope one day to slay,

the distance between where you and I lay,

But ill have to bide,

the time tell your by my side,

your parents disagree,

with what is happening between you and me,

your friends don’t know how,

we can be as close as we are now,

your in all of my dreams,

every time I wake I want to scream,

because your not as near,

as my dreams make you appear,

because of the distance,

I am not able to witness,

how beautiful you are,

so I think of stealing a car,

and drive the many miles,

just to see your smile,

but because of time,

I can’t drive to make you mine,

my mind always plans,

how to get to you if I can,

but without you near enough to hold,

to others my heart starts growing cold,

but when we talk there is a fire,

that warms my heart with desire,

I wish I could hear your voice,

I’d call you if I had the choice,

my soul prays with persistence,

that someday we will close the distance.

Author's Note

ignore grammer as always^^

Reviews

[JustThatPerson]

Seems like you're in the same boat as me and my boyfriend. It sucks >.<
But I really, really like this poem. It's sweet and amazing... I hope everything works out with you and her =]
-Em

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

i love it...its a really good poem...its hard to be so far away from ppl you love.
Great Job

[huntnteen]

thanks, i hope so too, and the last line was the basis for the whole poem.

[Nana Carmine]

I really like this. Especially the end, I love the last line. I hope you guys will be able to meet someday =)

~Nana Carmine