Runaway Train

Runaway Train

A Poem by zaneybear

Life is a runaway train

You just cant seem to stop

You dont know where it's from or going to

You dont know who's controlling it, when it's really you

You dont know if it's going left or RIGHT

Or if there is that unexpected turn or infamous fork in the road

Where you can take either path

Choose to jump, choose to stay on

You gotta keep going and moving on

Then eventualy that mysterious conductor with the strange hat

Will come out and say, you're the last passenger of the day

 

© 2013 zaneybear


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zaneybear
be brutally honest please

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Ho Zaneybear, to be brutally honest, I loved it. And the ending was surprising too! Life is as you describe.
As we get older and more mature in years,
My belief is that we dwell more and more in tears,
For times gone past, of thoughts of rest,
And of going too fast, with life's zest
But I can't get off your train of life...
Soooo....
I hope that man, with the strange hat
Keeps passing me by, and not saying that!

Must read more of yours! Lovely thought provoking words. Lol D


Posted 11 Years Ago



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