Combinations of 26 Letters

Combinations of 26 Letters

A Poem by zaneybear

I try to help but what a b***h,
I'll go home tonight and make a cut,
a little slit.

A cut for every word they've ever said,
When I don't show tomorrow then they'll know I'm dead.

 

They could care less, they all just pretend
I wish I wasn't here, I'd much rather die.

Dying is much easier than living this folly.

Full of fake smiles and empty promises,
friends and family with "bottomless hearts".

Will this pain ever go away?

The pain begins to fade,
with each stroke of the blade.

© 2013 zaneybear


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This is a beautiful piece. But no man or women should ever end their life for just simple lies they should continue headstrong through them until they can escape.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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DJ
I felt the pain through-out this piece. Dark but gripping. You are certainly right about the fake smiles and empty promises. A good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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zaneybear

11 Years Ago

you are so kind, thank you so much:)
DJ

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :P

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Added on August 5, 2013
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Tags: suicide, cutting, parents, family, dieing, dying, fake, depression, depressed, teen

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