Steps

Steps

A Poem by zaneybear
"

wrote this when I was really down and out..

"

I just sent the text.
Gotta work fast.

Step 1-Slipping the rope around my neck.

Step 2-Jumping
                Whiplash
                       Neck Snaps
                               Body Sways
  Feet Flailing
          Silence and Stopping.

 

Step 3-Wait

Step 4-Only the note would be able to explain.

© 2013 zaneybear


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You writing things like this scares me.
No one deserves to feel this bad i hope you dont have depression because that i have been told is extremely bad.
Im a message away if you want to talk.
I know talking wont fix anything i know i probably cant help although i wish i could.
Id love to try to make you feel better and give you the best advice i can.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaneybear

11 Years Ago

depression isn't extremely bad, I do suffer from it, but it just is exhausting that's it, it's hard .. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

11 Years Ago

writing is a great way to let your emotions out thats true.
Im here for you if you ever want t.. read more



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You writing things like this scares me.
No one deserves to feel this bad i hope you dont have depression because that i have been told is extremely bad.
Im a message away if you want to talk.
I know talking wont fix anything i know i probably cant help although i wish i could.
Id love to try to make you feel better and give you the best advice i can.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaneybear

11 Years Ago

depression isn't extremely bad, I do suffer from it, but it just is exhausting that's it, it's hard .. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

11 Years Ago

writing is a great way to let your emotions out thats true.
Im here for you if you ever want t.. read more
Did you try this or jt was just conjured by the mind? Cos I was already on the edge of my seat and praying that all will fine....The journey to self is a tumultuous one, we only just have to be strong.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 5, 2013
Last Updated on October 30, 2013
Tags: suicide, depression

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