Fade

I dont know what to think

My thoughts

They go away in a blink

Not a flash

That seems to short

But they tend to drag on

Into long blinks

Blinks filled with disapointment 

Blinks filled with rage

Bringing my eyelashes

Down,

Back up,

All just to do one thing, 

Flush the tears away

That i cried that day

The tears will eventually fade

So will my mind

They will eventually

Over time

Fade

Into what? nothing

Why is it i feel so distant,

Feel so far away.

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Writing sometimes makes the unmanageable confusion no longer matter. Getting it out from the darkness is the important thing. Where it goes once it leaves you, who the hell cares...just leave

[zaneybear]

thanks for taking the time to read and review

[Riding the Rainbow]

You really expressed what I feel inside..thank you..you did an amazing job..

[zaneybear]

thank you so much for your time reading and reviewing :)

[DJ]

Beautifully written, as always Zaneybear. Writing is the perfect way to purge and release emotions, some of which we can't say in out loud. Big fan of your work. Stay strong :)

[zaneybear]

thank you so much:) this means so much to me:)

[zainul]

Captured the thoughts perfectly and transformed into a nice poem.

[zaneybear]

thanks a lot, it means so much that people are understanding.

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
That's a pleasure for me too.

[one sky]

When emptiness has subdued ourselves emotionally and mentally, it's like that we just need to escape or to fade so that we won't feel the pain anymore...

Emotional piece...nice release.

[zaneybear]

thank you so much, means a lot you took time to read and review

[dartford]

Ok, wanted to read you
and glad I did because
this is good..

[zaneybear]

you really mean that? tank you so much:)

[dartford]

of course I mean it...you're a writer,
Zaney, and I'm glad you're out there..
You write with strength as well as
vulnerability x

[zaneybear]

thank you so much!!!

[dartford]

And it's 3 in the morning over here so
I'm going to bed but i'll read more
of your poems soon, because I WANT
TO! Night night...

[zaneybear]

goodnight dear:)