the room

resurrect in the room of uncertainty

stranger is his mystery

lights of the city shine to life

through the windowpane of solitude

now still,    time begs to wander

the room,   in other times,

has certainly been fonder

Author's Note

good or no good

Reviews

[James Helm]

definitely good.

[Renée]

I think it is very good ..

Your poem brings images to my mind.. someone who is pondering the future, in a familiar space, that had held happier times..

[hundi]

great insight to what i was saying, wow , thank u

[Renée]

insight is easy when the poet ( that is you btw) gives clear images ( :

Interesting....

[Holly Mason]

interesting to read
good lines..thought out well
through the windowpane of solitude-enjoy the imagery this line brings
thank you for sharing