Muffled

when you are task but your voiceless

No words to utter
just a heart of a runner
trembling and about to shutter

i wanted to shout
i wanted to whisper
i wanted to speak
the message i recieved.

Who can hear
who would listen
who?......

Is anybody there
Has anybody care
has anybody dare

Time is running
stop the bluffing
watch out for the Warning!
keep listening.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Seems like a muffled voicemail; and the receiver is shocked, disappointed, in fact speechless... he listens to this message and cant' believe what he is hearing.....he seemingly calls for help, but keeps listening as the message gets worse as there is some kind of warning... the the reader has no idea of what may happen....the receiver keeps listening..... and we don't know the ending....mysterious!
Best, B
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[Betty Hermelee]

Sometimes when one is very troubled and breathing fast, like a runner, no voice comes out. no matter how hard you try... and feel like you're all alone, even though you may be calling for help.
Well done!
Best, Betty

[Ranger Kessel]

Nicely done. I enjoyed the form and will prolly emulate it. A nice read.