nom de guerre

care to be bare, share some tender loving care, and you'll be walking on air. waiting for the signal to change will keep you with the rest of the herd.

the mornin's Meaning Only a(rgh)nnoyed.
Deafening yella sun ate busy eyelids,
nutritiously nosy, nonyabizness honks o'traffic o'
tardy birds, bees, tulips, tardy flies, thieves, tardy tries, But
plop'd stopped in Bear's bed most o'Bear eves.
Bear nag'd the Snores I make'd with newless face,
Bear knows not o'Bear snores likesame, graced.
fried Four frantic eyelids 4 breakfast.

Bemusing day o'Bear-muse (de)party.
Deafening red sun witherin' n'deafen'd by the eyelidless.
tardy Insipids 4ever tardy. playful Bear n'Me looped
bedroom-bends through hungry gaits and curious claws.
prance'd, scowl'd, scoffed, howl'd all o'Bear noons.
Bear take'd Two travelin' eyelids, leave'd a Bearless room, But
left the Snores Bear make'd in grace.
haunted, taunted, Rolling Rock'd, dauntless ticker undocked,
vestige'd snoring alarm'd All o'clock.
the mornin's Meaning Only unBearably a(rgh)nnoyed.

Author's Note

the first poem I've ever written.

Reviews

[kalra]

first you have written? really really like this man !

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Very nicely done, very descriptive