To those who are harsh

I may not.
Be David Bowden
My word may not
Flow as amazing.
As his
He is a talented
Poet however
I am merely
An amateur poet.
I love God.
I try to have my pen.
And my words.
be a servant to the Lord.
I know to most.
My poetry is complete nonsense.
I know most people.
Think my poetry runs on
And has no meaning.
But I try!
I wish to be a poet.
Just like David Bowden,
I understand that I have a long
Ways to become a good poet.

Reviews

[Re-Pete]

Your faith and passion are evident. Don't worry about the polish of the poetry. It speaks and has a lot to say. Keep writing.

[child of God]

Thank you sir