tears

Tears we can't deny them
They are a part of us
It doesn't matter how
Strong you think you are
You are human
Therefore you have emotions
Raising us children
The way you did is not right
I cry you judge
You have said
McElroy's are strong
Stop your whining
Hmm have you
walk with my feet
How about you
Live in my shoes
Trust me you would cry to
If I can't cry and let it out
Then I don't want to be a McElroy
Because we all are human
We all cry it's a coping mechanisms
I have heard enough of your insults
If you think I am a whinebag
Then so be it Steven McElroy
I do not give a care
What you say anymore
Love you father
But I love my heavenly father more
He does not judge
he loves me for me
So you have a choice
love me for me
Or don't love me at all
You can't pick and choose
You either love or hate
I don't care god is
My Lord
My friend
And your
replacement

Reviews

[Kayleen]

very well written to get your emotions across. small suggestions instead of "been in my feet" just because that doesn't grammatically make sense you might want to try "walk with my feet" I really like the thought behind this poem and how you have conveyed everything so clearly.

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write! LOVE the raw emotion and straight forward truth:)
Keep up the good work my friend and b-blessed!