broken girl is pulled to her feet

Love conquers all

there once was a troubled little girl

She sits on her bed thinking about life a little too much
She thinks alot
She wonders about life
her love one not there to comfort her
She screams at Herself in her head pull it together
Your not that broken girl he picked up anymore

Don't go back
She has the urge to say cool or interesting
But she just sits there debating
If she should tell him her mistake
Crying regretting ever doing it

She lost control slipped back in her little depression
As her love one waits wondering probably worrying
She thinks a second later

And texts "im sorry I failed you I love you"

she puts the phone down And looks at her wrists and stats crying praying

God ,
My life stinks right now cause of my parents and I'm grounded in tell I move out but I deserve It just not that much grounding I at least deserve three weeks but anyway I'm asking if you Could do me a favor please lord help my parents understand that it is already hard enough Time I am going through and help me with everything I BELIEVE! I believe in the healing hands Of you but my mom and dad really need you the most my dad can be so mean so please help Him the most and god I pray that you give me strength because I feel like killing myself but You can heal me please answer this one especially thank you
Amen

As she finishes her prayers her phone beeps
Expecting a break up text from her boyfriend
She picks it up
And smiles for the first time that day
As she reads

"Why would you do that hug~a~boo
I love you with all my heart
please don't do that again
Call me talk about it"
Surprised she replies:

"Your not breaking up with me?
But last time you told me
That the next time you do

That we are through
She waits for him to reply

And then reads:

"Babe I would never leave you
You are my everything
That was a bluff
I would never forgive my self if I left you"
Smiling now happy she thanks god
Wraps her wrists in bandages and goes to bed

Some may think why would someone do that?
Why would a person forgive someone for breaking a promise?
But fellow readers
That is what love is all about
The boy loves the girl so much
That he didn't dumb her
When she needed him the most
He stayed and he helped that girl
Is still helping that girl

He stayed by her side
And now is in a 13 month relationship with her
I am now going to admit
That that girl is me
And he is still by my side
Even tho i slipped up
Not even two weeks ago
I love that man
I thank god for putting him in my life

Reviews

[Keletso Mopai]

I couldn't finish reading because there is no punctuation whatsoever. your grammar is very disturbing. should work on that

[Daniel Whitaker]

This is really good. It's better than my stories.

[nate the great]

threats never get anything but broken hearts and tears, i will never threaten that again i swear and with the populous as my witness......boooyah

[child of God]

Wow just wow I thought you deleted your cafe to tell you the truth surprised me hon

[Jamestown]

Love does conquer all! It is the key to this and the next life:)
Great write my friend, keep it up:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[SmittyJas]

Touched my heart dear sweet broken girl smile