timeless

A word is dead
When it is said
I say it just
Begins to live
In this short life
That only lasts an hour
How much how little
Is within our power

Author's Note

My cousin. Chalnged me to write something with some type of rhyme scheme well here's what I came up with not very good at rhyming as you see if you read some of my previous work they don't rhyme but I don't turn down a challenge enjoy

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

How much how little
Is within our power

Yes this goes for everything - words, love, life, compasssion ...
Love this little write. Only a few words, but a deep meaning. Truly well done.

[child of God]

Thank you fellow writer

[SmittyJas]

You have to power to make the words timeless and last throughout the ages.

[AmjadPenboyoflight]

very good write
you seem meet challenge friend

rhyme not necessary for good poem

[Tks]

A strong, pervasive sense and knowledge of causality is present in your words. You know the intricacies between the cause and effect of words, and how they reveal so much, yet tell little.

[Saddam]

In this short life
That only lasts an hour.

Short yet a powerful one.
Well and effective write.

[Daniel Whitaker]

It's really good. I would say that you won the challenge.

[child of God]

Lol thank you

[Jamestown]

Great though, and the rhyming is fine ,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[child of God]

Thank you ...