truth

truth

A Poem by child of God
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some people they lie to themselves and others because they are scared or believe no one cares

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I’m fine



I’m not fine pleases help me



I’m just tired

I can’t take this anymore

I already ate

I starve myself

Go away

Show me you care enough to care

I’m just cold

I don’t want you to see my scars

I’m better I promise

I’ve never been this bad

I’m ok

I just want to die

© 2015 child of God


Author's Note

child of God
I have to admit I did this all my life still am there is only one person that has succeed in getting me to stop doing that to him I only slip up on him every once and awhile

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Bless his soul a true friend indeed and you are in need if you have feeling like these. I pray for the weak so some day they to will be strong like me I was weak once and frustrated Needed to rest but came roaring back with the blessing of my savior JC and his challenge for me was to write and find therapy and so I did write and found my way back. Bless you broken Girl it won't always be this way. Have Faith.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wooooh! This piece scream raw emotions! I pray my friend is ok!!!
Please let me know your ok, my heart literally started racing, I have
been down this wretched road! I was feeling this low not to
long ago and I WAS NOT OK:( Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow can I relate to this.. This used to be me! And just has you, I have someone (my best friend) who always sees through the things I say, she knows when I'm lying about how I feel. For the most part I've stopped being like this.
Good job on the poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This really portrays a close friend of mine. They are so closed up and won't let anyone too close. They get angry when they feel I show too much concern, but I know they need it. I've known them for almost 9 years and I don't plan on stopping now. I care about them too much to become one of the many that has given up on them.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have been this way for most of my life and still am because I hide my feelings. This poem definitely explains my New Years Eve when I was completely paranoid that my then-girlfriend was gonna break up with me and I was hiding it for a while and she did after she said she wasn't gonna leave me. You did a good job on this poem and I like the font too lol


Posted 9 Years Ago


child of God

9 Years Ago

Thank you...
This is how we try to hide our feelings. You did amazing putting meaning of our phrases. I am also glad you found someone to help you stop.

Posted 9 Years Ago


child of God

9 Years Ago

Thank you Dan ...do you mind if Call you Dan?
Broken girl
Daniel Whitaker

9 Years Ago

I don't mind at all.
child of God

9 Years Ago

Okay good...
Broken. Girl

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Added on February 13, 2015
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edmond , OK



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My name is Stephanie Phillips I am 25 years old I have been writing for nearly seven years I'm a mother of two kids daughter's autistic with apraxia of speech son adhd and I am an autistic woman who .. more..

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