tear and tear

With out you
I am empty
I am hollow
I am nothing

They tear and tear
They take me away
They stripped me of you

I miss you
It feels like
They torn a hole
In my heart

All they do is
Tear and tear
I cry and cry
They yell and yell

I want to see you
But they tear and tear
They keep us apart

But they cant
Tear our love

They cant penetrate our love
But they can tear and tear
At my heart they make
Me cry and cry

With out you
I am empty
I am hollow
I am nothing

They tear and tear
They take me away
They stripped me of you

I miss you
It feels like
They torn a hole
In my heart

I want to see you
I miss you
I love you

They just tear and tear
But they cant tear our love
They can never tear us apart

Author's Note

I wrote this during a tough month for me

Reviews

[AmjadPenboyoflight]

this is good write
keep persevere

[Jamestown]

Great raw emotional longing for love, this was well written and expressed, thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

[Daniel Whitaker]

This is a really marvelous piece. The emotions, the repetition. The one reason people fight for love.

[Rachel Grace]

Good job :) The emotion is expressed really well and the repetition and antithesis are beautiful

[SmittyJas]

Very well written emotions run fluidly through and thought Tears flow for the love of him. Great write I know you have many more. I see talent here written in these words before me.