Once Broken

I once broken but now

Broken .... i thought i would forever broken
I thought there was no hope
Sinking in depression
Being prounced on by panic attacks
Being pushed by the past

But ....then he came i never thought
Anyone could love me
I allways thought my
Past is hard to look past

He saw right through the mask
He saw the broken girl and yet
He loved her he took her under his wing

Pulling her out of the quick sand
Taking the monsters off her
Teaching her how to push back

She thinks she is ugly
She thinks she is lost
She lost all hope

But....
he came and made her feel pretty again
He made her feel whole again
He gave her hope when there was none

She is broken but slowly he is puting her together
Always there when she is sinking
He is her Angel sent from god

Author's Note

Thank you you took a broken girl when every body eles only saw the mask
Thank you for changing my life you know who you are

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Broken Girl what a wonderful uplifting write good and bright you see your light its with him he love you from within and your heart struck gold when he became bold enough to ask for you hand and you replyed you're my Man. Love this write from you keep up the good works.

[child of God]

thank you mr. smitty

[Daniel Whitaker]

This is beautiful, thank you for requesting it for me to read. I wish that I could find someone like that.

[Saddam]

She thinks she is ugly
She thinks she is lost
She lost all hope

But....
he came and made her feel pretty again
He made her feel whole again
He gave her hope when there was none

This part raised poem very well...
Like it context dear.....

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write! I feel the pain and then the hope! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Open Your Mind Before Y..]

I know this feeling too well. These are definitely the ones to hold on to. Some people go their whole life without meeting their "angel". You are truly blessed to be one of the few.

Great write!

[nate the great]

Yea I do know who I am thanks babe love you