No hope

Do you hear that ?

That's the sound of my
Heart breaking.
Soul ripping .
Self-esteem crashing.
Mind frezzing.
Hope dying.
Me crying.

Why.....
Mother not Carring.
Uncle touching .
People judging.
Past haunting.
Life pushing.
Me breaking.

Sometimes
I
Just
Want
To
Give
Up

Reviews

[s y e]

Wow. This is deep, however, I think there is always hope... maybe you don't think so but I do. Have some faith hon.

[funsized fairy]

This one is really good. idk what else to say soo...fjdjdjdjsdndbf

[Daniel Sala]

Nice style, both the question at the beginning and the way the lines get shorter as the poem goes on to the end. There is a lot of pained sadness in this piece, a raw write.

[Deathless]

Wow...

This poem certainly almost show's your entire life's story

I like this poem, it is emotional and well worded. It paints a picture on its own. Very good poem