That girl

You see that girl?
She looks happy right
Telling jokes,smiling ,
having a great time
And.... Dying inside
she is hurting and tired
Tired of all the Drama,
Tired of not being good enough,
Tired of life, but she doesn't
Want to look dramatic , weak
And attention seeking so
She keeps it all inside
Acts like everythings
Perfect but crys at night
So everybody thinks
That she has no problems
And her life is perfect
If only they knew
The truth ?

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

The truth is we all have problems Life Just not fair The grade did not come to me as easy as it did for others that seemed to smooth it along in school popular kids the cool sect and we struggled with assignments in school the simple things were difficult nothing came to us easy. Somehow we pulled up our boot straps and got our selfs together and made a life for ourselves We smile we laugh we joke around and we are a lot better off for it keep trying Broken Girl you got my support.

[Jamestown]

This is a great piece that many will relate with, for the simple fact that everyone
has had to play the part of happy when truly sad or some other emotions
running wild, my mother says" fake till you make it" unfortunately many
have been doing this to often, then they lose the real person to
the fake:( Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[child of God]

Thank you for reviewing i regrete doing that now i am struggling to find who i use to doing that charges a person In drastic way i know from experience sadly i know alot. Of bad things from experience

[Daniel Sala]

Funsized Fairy and Vidya are spot on with their reviews, I completely agree. You show insight into others' inner lives and selves with compassion, and have shaped these ideas into a neat, thoughtful, clear poem. A really nice work of yours, and as a result a thoroughly enjoyable read.

[MsJewel]

A person can only hide behind a smile for so long - I know this from personal experience. The good news is there are brighter days ahead - one just needs to hold that faith close to their heart to see them...

:) Julie

[Laura Harrison]

This is unfortunately the truth about most teenage girls nowadays, and I was one of them. This is a great poem, thank you for sharing

[Vidya Bacchus]

Stephanie you are a great writer and your poems have such feeling.Great piece:)

[funsized fairy]

OH MY GOSH!! You are an amazing writer. So full of ideas. Keep up these amazing poems.

[child of God]

Thank you Tata
Love you Tata