the real world

Dear outsiders,
You may of heard that earth is a beautiful place
well here's What my plant really is
It is an evil place with raptist ,neglect and murder
And there is no cure for it is the worst curse ever
Its called sin ever human on this planet has it
I have it she has it everyone has
It its a curse on this planet
It's a curse we all are damed to have on us
Some of us don't care We like
But me I hate myself for
What I have done in my past
Senserly
Broken girl

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Really cool format and great message! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Daniel Sala]

Sincerely, the way you convey a person eating themself up about the things they have done they consider "bad"/a sin, and how they see the world around them very negatively, no doubt with good reason makes for a raw, frank, compelling poem.
We all live in little ponds, sometimes we get to move from horrible ponds to nice ponds with good fish free from sin.

[Coyote Poetry]

The real world is hard. I was raised in Detroit. We learn to accept things and if we are wise. Find places where we can know peace and beauty. I was lucky. I joined the Army. I saw 40 countries and I learn the world can be beautiful. I tell the young people. Travel, test life and have fun. We will trip many times. A lucky person won't repeat the same mistakes. I enjoy your poetry and thoughts. make the reader think and ponder. The goal of a writer. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote