Dear cuting

A letter to my worsted enemy

Dear cutting,
I don't need you anymore,
all you did was get me in
trouble, you are
not cool, you didn't
help, all you did was cover
up the pain. Yes, in the
past I thought
you were my only
friend but I
was wrong,
you are nothing
now, just
a part of my
past. Bye.

Sincerely,
Broken girl

Reviews

[Blondie123]

You're a strong girl, I know how hard it can be sometimes. All you have to keep thinking is if you cut, you're letting whoever/whatever is causing the pain win, and also, you're making life in the long run a lot harder for yourself as you're creating permanent memories of the pain you went through.
Keep it up honey, should be proud!

[Kimberley Reid]

I can sadly relate to this a lot and I am proud of you for writing a poem so strongly and open as this, it's nice to know I'm not alone with how I felt when I stopped. Thankyou, this is amazing, please keep writing!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your poems are so sad.Be strong broken girl you will heal and get better and one day you will realize you are no longer broken you are healthy and whole smile it helps:)

[Wolfwind]

I like the personal strength that this piece resonates with. Being able to overcome and keep walking is a healing path. It's good that you are able to set sail away from that stage in life.

Aaron - Wolfwind

[child of God]

Thank you ..