**MY WISH**

             **MY WISH**

 

 

I hope to always be surrounded
by the ones I love
to always be changing and evolving
into better person
but most of all,
to never lose sight
of the simple things
that give such great meaning
to this thing called life.

Reviews

[The Fatal Lover]

It's short. But sweet. Great job. I loved it. =)

[Francesca]

aw this was short and honest :) these feelings should be the only things anyone ever wants in life. i hope you have all of these! actually in contrast to what the other reviewer said i really liked the last line! great poem

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Wow that was awesome! Sometimes, its the simple things that make life beautiful. I however think the last line could have been better. Overall an awesome write that conveys so much in such less number of lines. I like it :)