**SOULS**

**SOULS**

A Poem by Taylor

                     **SOULS**

 

 

When does one feel the inner beauty
of another
Feel that they are both part of the
same heartbeat
To touch one another with only
their minds
To feel such closeness that your minds
are entertwined
Moving together as one body...
one mind
Every thought, feeling, emotion
merged so deeply
You can't tell where one ends
and the other begins.

© 2010 Taylor


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A beautiful poem indeed. Such frustration and longing! I like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautifull expression it feels like LOVE is pouring out from this poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a really beautiful piece and I can relate to it so much. Amazing flow, rhythm and such.

It's wonderfully simple and yet has that quality of depth to it.
I guess this write describes how two people come together in love, to form one.

I agree with this write in many ways, but I also think that one can be an individual within a loving relationship as well.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Taylor
Taylor

Las Vegas, NV



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Hi there! Thanks for stopping by my page! I hope that you enjoy my poems. Sometimes I write for therapy and other times something Ive observed or that people have said will stick in my mind and end.. more..

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