serpent (cinquain)

serpent (cinquain)

A Poem by hcarson
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a new form of poem inject positivity has been teaching me

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SERPENT (CINQUAIN)
SERPENT
SLIT EYES, FORK TONGUE
SLITHERING AND TWISTING
SHIVERS UP YOUR SPINE, FROZE IN PLACE.
VIPER

© 2016 hcarson


Author's Note

hcarson
THANK YOU TO INJECT POSITIVITY FOR GIVING ME A BETTER NOUN THAN I WAS INITIALLY WORKING WITH :)

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Ip sure is nice, isn't he? Alliteration everywhere! Emphathizes the 'ssss'.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

well i hade it where i had a whole row of 's' but then my synonym didnt match my noun lol so changed.. read more

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Added on August 10, 2016
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hcarson
hcarson

cardiff, barry, United Kingdom



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I have an interest in writing short stories and poetry in some shape or form apparently since coming here! Being a mother of five means I have no end of inspiration! I'm an animal lover and have an Am.. more..

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