FOREVER MEMORY

FOREVER MEMORY

A Poem by hcarson
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yea..another quickie i will have to fix lol

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FOREVER MEMORY
A forever memory,
etched into heart and brain.
A permanent reminder that
things will never be the same.

we lived for the moment;
we knew it could never last,
we lived a lifetime in those
few months, like every breath
was our last.

I reluctantly accept that part
of life is said and done;
now's the time to look forward,
gain a brand new set of eyes!
Discovor what the future holds
for this new phase of my life.

© 2016 hcarson


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hcarson
ALL COMMENTS AND CRITICISMS WEELCOME.

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Gee
Really like what you are expressing but it seems a bit higgledee piggledee to me. Seems that you are undecided on whether or not to rhyme and the different length stanzas throw me a wee bit.....sorry !!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

Your correct gee, no need to apologise when ur right. I wanted to do something but had a totally bla.. read more
Gee

8 Years Ago

My pleasure, haven't read you in a while so will have a butcher's at some others in the near future... read more
hcarson

8 Years Ago

I understand, it exactly same for me. I been away for quite awhile so only just back to writing so t.. read more

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hcarson
hcarson

cardiff, barry, United Kingdom



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