Condensing your words (senryu)

First attempt at senryu thanks to dhimen for explaining...once again lol

Condensing your words (senryu)

Condensing your words

No easy task to achieve

Keep heart and believe

Author's Note

All criticisms welcome 😀

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Deeply meant, the second line compliments the first line so well... It is really hard to condense some words and thoughts of people, that is why the last line is important to have... Well done again mate... Another fabulous start... You are hitting sixes now... Lol...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[hcarson]

Aha, a!l thanks to you Dhiman...check out the spelling 😉 ....your a star!!!

[Inject Positivity]

Lol, you are spot on!!! Hehe... Thank you, missed you very much on this site... Very happy to see you...

[hcarson]

Iam glad to be back and to be excited about things again...i kind of lost all that with college...so glad to find it again

[Inject Positivity]

We are happy to have you back in our old home again...

[Shannon]

Very nice! The message of course. But I also really enjoy that you have maintained the syllable count, while creating three line of equal length.

[Bacchus]

I agree with S. Mi here... very nice in message, count and lengths of lines. clear yet when something reads that well, it is done well!

[hcarson]

Thanks tonyou both, not tried this before so practising,. Both of your comments are extremely appreciate ☺☺