Lumps 'n' Bumps

Lumps 'n' Bumps

A Poem by hcarson
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bored half way through class...not at all thinking of going out to lunch.....

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Lumps 'n' Bumps
lumps, bumps, curves galore,
I have enough, don't need more...
just one more chocolate - 
a little slice of cake...
surely not a lot of difference,
these little treats will make!
I revel in the sweetness,
the crumbly delight - 
then acknowledge the naughtiness
of my secret nibbling through the night.
I sneek back up the stairs,
climb back into bed.
The thoughts of creamy chocolate
still swirling round my head.

© 2016 hcarson


Author's Note

hcarson
any comments and criticisms welcome :)

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Very well said and fits like a glove. I've never had a particularly strong sweet tooth, especially when it comes to chocolate, but I know the feeling well enough to say that this poem tells it like it is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

I dont have a sweet tooth either, now savoury stuff on the other hand..different story haha...thank .. read more
crap- i need to go workout...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

Aha...me to..;)
sweets are so tempting especially chocolate. How many time have I tried to reduce taking sweets. It works but not in front of chocolate.
A very lovely write. This poem has a good flow to it and a fine use of rhymes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

thank you so much shabeeh, you are right..chocolate should never be a part of any diet unless its to.. read more
Ah! Chocolates! the unforgettable tasty pieces that makes us happy no matter what situation we are in... Makes me remind of my childhood days(we are all still child in terms of eating chocolates)... Lovely...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

especially if that chocolate has crispy orange bits in it..yum :)
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Gee
Morning,you be careful you'll end up the size of a bus !!!! Enjoyed the read

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

no chance in my house...kids get there first haha thanks for reading and the review, much appreciate.. read more
second stanza i think you meant "naughtiness"

sweets are such an addiction...should i get up and raid the cookie jar, or stay in bed and try to sleep...

we found the answer in this poem...

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

Aha, i certainly did mean that, thank you for pointing that out i missed that several times :) than.. read more

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hcarson
hcarson

cardiff, barry, United Kingdom



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