Dementia..Altzeimers..can't imagine how hard it is to watch a loved one slip away to this illness..must be so hard..all comments and criticisms welcome..
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It's hard for me, because I volunteer at a Memory Care residence for people with dementia. It's very sad, but incredibly touching when the family members come. Sometimes, the residents remember, and sometimes they don't. But when they do remember, it's golden.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
i also worked in care and looked after a man with dementia..it was so sad..he remember nothing reall.. read morei also worked in care and looked after a man with dementia..it was so sad..he remember nothing really except where he worked at a train station when he was a young man. so sad :(
very emotional poem to read and digest it's a horrible disease. Thanks for sharing your thoughts & I wish you well also.
maria
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you maria, it is a terrible disease but mmay be one it will be something more curable, your co.. read moreThank you maria, it is a terrible disease but mmay be one it will be something more curable, your comment is much appreciated, wishing you well also 😊
It's hard for me, because I volunteer at a Memory Care residence for people with dementia. It's very sad, but incredibly touching when the family members come. Sometimes, the residents remember, and sometimes they don't. But when they do remember, it's golden.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
i also worked in care and looked after a man with dementia..it was so sad..he remember nothing reall.. read morei also worked in care and looked after a man with dementia..it was so sad..he remember nothing really except where he worked at a train station when he was a young man. so sad :(
Memories are precious commodities. Over the last few years I learned just how precious they are. Hold on to them and make more. Hug your significants while you can and tell them what they need to hear. There are no “do-overs” in life.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
very true, you never know when you will lose someone and be left with nothing but memories so best w.. read morevery true, you never know when you will lose someone and be left with nothing but memories so best we make the most of them :)
This is heartbreakingly tender!!!! I'm almost crying!!! I have some memory issues due to a bad neck injury, but I can only imagine how tragic it would feel to be the narrator of this poem, with issues to this degree. You've pegged this on every level. The earnestness, the honesty, the determination to hold onto a thought that's bound to slip thru one's fingers (happens to me constantly these days!) I don't even know this situation firsthand, but your poem is so lifelike, it feels as if I've just experienced it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
thank you Barleygirl, like yourself i'm having memory issues, not to this extent thankfully, i did h.. read morethank you Barleygirl, like yourself i'm having memory issues, not to this extent thankfully, i did however care for someone with bad dementia so kind of got to see just how bad it is . it must be so horrid for all involved when this happens to a loved one. thank you for reading, your comments are very appreciated :)
i can hear the screams inside, the frustration...reminds me of Dickinson's "i felt a funeral in my brain"
like the speaker knows she has sense still breaking through, but also senses she is losing her mind...that awareness of becoming unaware...and the "finished knowing then"
is that ending that is dreaded.
well done, here.
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8 Years Ago
you have got it spot on Jacob :) thank you so much for your review, i appreciate it very much :)
Even without any illness im forgetting what i have to keep in mind... it is hard to take... you did a brilliant job to pour out the true feelings... i know how hard it is for you or for anyone.... an illness like that is unbearable... and the most sad part of it is that there is no real cure of that illness.... brilliant use of simplicity and i loved how they really spoke the feelings.... i think there is a printing mistake in the line "who am i too you? ", i think you wanted type ''to" instead of "too".... another excellent example of your ability to write down your heart and mind.... full ratinga dear frnd...
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8 Years Ago
you know me and my spelling IP, not my strongest forte haha, i certainly did mean 'to' haha, thank y.. read moreyou know me and my spelling IP, not my strongest forte haha, i certainly did mean 'to' haha, thank you for the lovely comments. you are so righ about these illness's, it is so hard to see anyone going through it, watching the core of who they are slowely disappear. I cared for a man with dementia and it was awful sad to see the pictures of who he was before he was robbed of all that made him who he was at the the core so sad ...hope you are feelin g better soon :(
8 Years Ago
you are welcome mate.... i understand dear frnd... hey by the way you are doing a great job on poems.. read moreyou are welcome mate.... i understand dear frnd... hey by the way you are doing a great job on poems, what about the story "TRAPPED"?.....
8 Years Ago
i want to continue with trapped, i have started a new chapter but i'm stumbling a bit on it to be ho.. read morei want to continue with trapped, i have started a new chapter but i'm stumbling a bit on it to be honest. i need to have a few hours of silence i think to really think about it,now we have the holidays i may get it so hopefully get something up soon. how is your next chapter going?
8 Years Ago
i think that's the best thing to do... im confident enough that you'll come up with something great... read morei think that's the best thing to do... im confident enough that you'll come up with something great... it's better to take time to think than to write down something in hurry.... that's why im staying away from thinking on writing too much as it is putting pressure on me, so now im working on my next chapter... thank you so much H for encouraging me that day....
8 Years Ago
anytime IP thats what friends are for, to help and encourage. you always help and encourage me..coul.. read moreanytime IP thats what friends are for, to help and encourage. you always help and encourage me..couldn't do these things without people like you :)
absolutely but it is rare to find frnds like you, most people would have left me right there where i.. read moreabsolutely but it is rare to find frnds like you, most people would have left me right there where i was couple of days ago... thank you for being a "true" frnd...
8 Years Ago
always here for you, regardless where you are or how you are feeling, just a message away :)
8 Years Ago
i know, you are a family member to me... thank you for joining this website... you are a mother like.. read morei know, you are a family member to me... thank you for joining this website... you are a mother like frnd....
Oh my, nice and somewhat sad words at the same time. Forgetting is a curse, especially when it comes to things you want to keep in mind or when it results in illness. Nicely and lightly (in a good sense) elaborated topic. P.S.:Your last lines read splendid. :)
But what a review of mine would it be without being picky and a tad nagging ^^ - the second stanza is missing a line and the third line reads a tiny little bit clumsy somehow...Other than that it reads well. :)
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8 Years Ago
thank you :)..yes i agree with the third and missing line part..just didn't know what eles to do wit.. read morethank you :)..yes i agree with the third and missing line part..just didn't know what eles to do with it if i'm honest, had a lot a trouble getting any lines out recently so i just grabbed em as they came lol..may go back and try an improve it sometime..specially that third line bit coz it will bug me now ..thanks for your comments, always appreciated :)
8 Years Ago
You're welcome. It'll be nice if you managed to expand it a little. Just one line though even only o.. read moreYou're welcome. It'll be nice if you managed to expand it a little. Just one line though even only one can be really struggling at times.
8 Years Ago
yes, true..it so hard isn't it when your head is just saying' no..absolutely not' lol..i got so many.. read moreyes, true..it so hard isn't it when your head is just saying' no..absolutely not' lol..i got so many scraps of paper everywhere at the moment full of scribbles its unreal..my partner going mad at mess i'm making :)
Haha. I've gone through this time too. Now I can focus better, I manage to type poems directly into .. read moreHaha. I've gone through this time too. Now I can focus better, I manage to type poems directly into the add writing option here without musing too much about single lines or fitting ones. There are still lines and images in my mind I'd like to extend but I'm currently not able to. Doesn't matter. It will eventually work out, one cannot force it.
8 Years Ago
i do everything on paper first...i love the feel of paper, the smell...i love ink! i entered the wor.. read morei do everything on paper first...i love the feel of paper, the smell...i love ink! i entered the world of kindle kicking and screaming, insisting it would never work...i'm currently on my fourth one..keep running them down through over use lol :)
"I know I loved you but why...and when." my favorite lines. Until that point I was casually reading but I literally gasped a little when the line processed. It was beautiful.
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8 Years Ago
thank you so much, wasn't sure how this would turn out as have really struggled with writing recentl.. read morethank you so much, wasn't sure how this would turn out as have really struggled with writing recently, your comments are very appreciated :)
8 Years Ago
I know how you feel, writing gets difficult especially when you start tripping on the littlest detai.. read moreI know how you feel, writing gets difficult especially when you start tripping on the littlest details.
Oh my, I'm so sorry. I'm glad you were strong enough to share this. I hope youre doing well.
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8 Years Ago
it isn't based on anything real just in general if you get me. i have memory issues but thankfully n.. read moreit isn't based on anything real just in general if you get me. i have memory issues but thankfully nothing to this extent but i just thought how awful it is for those that do, terrible disease
I have an interest in writing short stories and poetry in some shape or form apparently since coming here! Being a mother of five means I have no end of inspiration! I'm an animal lover and have an Am.. more..