An important message to remember when intimidation halts your writing. I personally like that the stanzas have a bit of a jumbled rhyme scheme. It hits the point home in a meta sort of way that an individual's writing doesn't have to be like everyone else's or necessarily follow guidelines. And it certainly isn't a be-all-end-all that it be perfect. Writers write because they love to write, right? Thank you for posting this. It's easy to forget sometimes.
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8 Years Ago
very true..thats what i'm trying to convince myself anyway haha. it is definitely theraputic regardl.. read morevery true..thats what i'm trying to convince myself anyway haha. it is definitely theraputic regardless of the quality so i will just keep enjoying , thank you so much for reading and your comments, much appreciated :)
i find it the most closest to me... the last two stanzas says what i truly feel about my writing abilities.... the whole poem says some amazing things about writing, we are all in the process of getting better... full ratings.... one of your best...
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8 Years Ago
you're right, you never stop learning, always something new to do or try..think that why sometimes i.. read moreyou're right, you never stop learning, always something new to do or try..think that why sometimes i freeze because there is just so much out there to do. i'm glad you like it and can relate to it.hope it helps ;)
practice, practice, practice to no end, not for the sake of perfection, but for the love of writing - you'll find the meaning there, much genuine, much plainer, than if we aim for perfection's sake alone - i try to write regularly and read some regularly
best to you,
steph
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8 Years Ago
I'm a prolific reader..read all sorts..it's my imagination i lack in..overthink things i think. than.. read moreI'm a prolific reader..read all sorts..it's my imagination i lack in..overthink things i think. thank you so much for your words, very much appreciated :)
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i remember my first poem, written when i was sixteen years old, and a flop, of course - just keep tr.. read morei remember my first poem, written when i was sixteen years old, and a flop, of course - just keep trying, if you love to write, no one can stop you - you're welcome, my friend :)
You are unique, creative and trying. Own your own style, thoughts and emotions and you will be fine. Never stop learning and inspiring. Excellent...:)........
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8 Years Ago
aww thank you so much Sami for the lovely comment and taking the time to read, much appreciated, tha.. read moreaww thank you so much Sami for the lovely comment and taking the time to read, much appreciated, thank you :)
An important message to remember when intimidation halts your writing. I personally like that the stanzas have a bit of a jumbled rhyme scheme. It hits the point home in a meta sort of way that an individual's writing doesn't have to be like everyone else's or necessarily follow guidelines. And it certainly isn't a be-all-end-all that it be perfect. Writers write because they love to write, right? Thank you for posting this. It's easy to forget sometimes.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
very true..thats what i'm trying to convince myself anyway haha. it is definitely theraputic regardl.. read morevery true..thats what i'm trying to convince myself anyway haha. it is definitely theraputic regardless of the quality so i will just keep enjoying , thank you so much for reading and your comments, much appreciated :)
First of all, its really an amusing topic of writing. A writing dedicated to all the writers...
Good job ma'am... I really appreciate the inspiration and words used here...
THE LOVE OF WRITING ALWAYS REMAINS PRECIOUS FOR THE WRITERS, MAY IT BE A GOOD PIECE OR AN AVERAGE PIECE OF WRITING, THE STRUGGLE FOR WRITING A SINGLE PIECE IS THE SAME FOR ANY KIND OF WRITING... this is what i have realized from your poem...
wonderful one, loved it...
I would like to request you to read my poems too and enjoy them.. thanks...
JENNY
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8 Years Ago
thank you jenny for your lovely review, i will most certainly review your poems, i will do so immedi.. read morethank you jenny for your lovely review, i will most certainly review your poems, i will do so immediately. your words are much appreciated :)
I already see a change in the way you are using words to convey more. It brought a smile to my face. Please keep writing.
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8 Years Ago
aww thank you, i'm trying hard to get there, love this site ,there are so many of you to learn from .. read moreaww thank you, i'm trying hard to get there, love this site ,there are so many of you to learn from and get inspiration from, your words are much appreciated :)
I can't believe how hopeful one poem can be. It's a great work made to inspire other newer writers such as yourself and I.
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8 Years Ago
exactly Zwsed , we all have days were we feel we arent good enoug, never will be etc but we are all.. read more exactly Zwsed , we all have days were we feel we arent good enoug, never will be etc but we are all good in our own ways and we can all improve and learn, we just have to keep going, keep taking advice and one day we will be exactly where we want to be...plus we get to enjoy the journey and the experience along the way. we must remember we write because we love it,,if some others dont it doesnt matter, there will be plenty that do and especially the person who worked so hard to create it :) thank you for your lovely response, we can learn together and not far from now look back and be amazed at how far we have come :)
Writing is the soul mate.I think we, the writer are quite blessed by getting it in our life.writing is all about feelings which are vibrant in your words.Thank you friend for sharing the beautiful poem.
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8 Years Ago
thank you Mou so much for your lovely words, they are very very much appreciated and thank you for r.. read morethank you Mou so much for your lovely words, they are very very much appreciated and thank you for reading :)
I have an interest in writing short stories and poetry in some shape or form apparently since coming here! Being a mother of five means I have no end of inspiration! I'm an animal lover and have an Am.. more..