THE KINKS

SHORT POEM ABOUT THE JOYS OF KINKS ALL OVER YOUR HEAD GRRR

THE KINKS

A curly kink here,

a curly kink there,

these bloody kinks

 are everywhere!

Sticking out the back,

poking out the sides.

Time to go to war with

a fistful of slides!

I slip a dozen here-

another dozen there,

I will eventually gain

control over this

unruly head of hair! 

Author's Note

after a dicussion with Vanessandthecat we realised our hair has serious issue! we have each done a poem i belive to help rid ourselves of our hairy frustrations :) comments and criticisms welcome :)

Reviews

[KWP]

I don't think you should be mislead, in my experience you will not win the fight with your hair, oh sure, momentarily it will allow you to believe you have some sort of rein over it, but no, because you see your hair and the elements of nature are a force together, the wind, the rain, the snow te sun --- ahhhhh it's a losing battle I tell you, best to take on the heart of a hippie and flow with nature ... :)

a lovely ditty from a chick in the city XX

[hcarson]

aha you speak nothing but the truth there haha!! i have given up i take pride in my nest..all birds welcome..bats at a cost..thanks for your great review :) xxx

[Lola]

hahaha I'm not good with reviewing but I totally enjoyed reading it! Great word play!

[hcarson]

thank you lola...every womens nightmare isn't it..then it rains and all hell breaks loose...my mum actually used to put a carrier bag on her hhead to try and stop the frizz in the rain...umbrella anyone haha? thanks for your lovely words, much appreciated :)

[Sangeetha]

Hahaha oh Ms Helen you did it again with your jokes...this poem was such good mix of frustration seriousness and humour you make it work very nice, very nice.

[hcarson]

thank you sangeetha :)...kinky hair is such a nuisance, can't do a thing with it haha

[Sangeetha]

Tell me about it. I have the most... frizziest hair ok. Even when it's not, there's this poof at the ends of my hair which makes me look like I'm from the eightys or something, which could be nice but I'd like it to behave the way I ask it to sometimes.

[hcarson]

haha sangeetha, you never fail to make me laugh, i so understand about the 'puffs' of hair at the end, i also get that sometimes.my problem with hair is that i think i inherited 3 diffterent types from family..it is straight in parts, curly in parts and wavy in others giving it an overall messy frizz no matter how i try to look tidy..if i wasn't a coward i would shave it off, drives me potty!!

[Sangeetha]

Oh my god, like seriously that is like the same problem I have, I mean I got a pretty good weave to the point my bff gets jealous, but sometimes you wish you had straight hair without uneven layers sticking out everywhere so that you at least tie a braid without ends sticking out everywhere you what I'm saying, I am so sad that you have to go through what I like to call the tristyle mess, where you have too much going on its looks like a party threw up on your head, and you be likr oh no I just woke up like this. And than it tskes three hours to fix it with an iron, I suggest we talk to our hair stylists cos I've been wanting to do it too.

[hcarson]

hahayou need to get on the stage!! a party threw up on your head haha...oh yes very apt discription! poor me i don't have a hair stylist although i do have the irons! ...maybe if i remembered to use them it wouldn't be such a mess haha..gunna get them out tonight i think..probably burn myself thinking of you and your party haha!!

[Sangeetha]

hahah omg! im like dying of laughter over here, ya lets have an ironing party i can do your hair and you can iron the clothes and we can both burn them through. hahaha!!

[hcarson]

i would as well..i'm terrible at ironing..and washing..i turn everything blue :haha :)

[Sangeetha]

Ahaha omg that would be a great line in a poem you should put that in.

[DrAnuradha Bele]

O yes! That's why I wear my hair short. Fun read.

[hcarson]

i tried wearing mine short when i was younger but because it is so thick and frizzy i ended up resembling a mushroom haha..gre it out after that hoping long hair would way it down..kind of works but my word the frizz!! glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading :)

[Inject Positivity]

haha... this was fun to read...i read the poem of Vanessaandthecat....both of these are very lovely to read... nice playing with words dear frnd... awesome....

[hcarson]

thank you IP just a bit of fun, enjoyed doing it,thanks for your lovely words :)

[V]

Hahaha. :D Just saw your poem about hair. Great. Fun to read, ironic and entertaining. I really thought about something else after reading the title. A playful attitude with words, I'd say. Yours is more straightforward than mine, I think but really so full of spree. :)

[hcarson]

hi yes, your right, most of my poems are pretty much straight forward..i guess it is becoming my 'style' haha..(plus i dont have the brains to make them anything else haha) but yes, it was fun :)...still a bloody mess though grrr ;) thanks for your lovely words :)

[V]

You're welcome. I like straightforwardness. :)

[Gee]

I was expecting Ray Davies or some saucy chambermaid getting up to no good.........
Another fine wee poem H

[hcarson]

aha thank you Gee your comments are much appreciated as always :)

[Gee]

My pleasure..