For Mother's Gone Ahead

For Mother's Gone Ahead

A Poem by hcarson
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Poem for those whonhavve lost their mother's

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FOR MOTHER'S GONE AHEAD

You may not be with us.
You may have gone ahead,
but our love for you has stayed
with us, in our hearts and in 
in our heads.
We remember your touch.
Your lips upon our cheeks.
Your love and your guidance,
our catch up's every week.
We miss the phone not ringing, 
not hearing your voice the other end,
still writing text messages with no
number with which to send.
We love our departed Mother's.
We miss them everyday,
but smile in the knowledge
we will be together with them one day.

© 2016 hcarson


Author's Note

hcarson
A bpoem for those out there today who have lost their mothers .

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when i was 2 i lost my father, i never experienced what is a father's love... feeling speechless....there are few people who can touch our hearts with their simple words and you are certainly one of them... my hat goes off to you.... thank you so much for this heart warming write.... it reminded me of my father.... thank you...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

aww IP your words aree always so lovely, i can't imagine how it is for people that have lost a paren.. read more
Inject Positivity

8 Years Ago

well i believe it's people like you who encourages us to gain that strength along with God...
hcarson

8 Years Ago

aww thank you IP, so ddo you with your lovely words and positive outlook :)



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Sad and beautiful tribute I've imagined thousands of times what it would be like to lose my Mother but when that day comes I don't think I'll ever be ready

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

no, i should imagine a person never is, no matter how old the parent is, still must be so difficult... read more
Sangeetha

8 Years Ago

your welcome Ms.H
when i was 2 i lost my father, i never experienced what is a father's love... feeling speechless....there are few people who can touch our hearts with their simple words and you are certainly one of them... my hat goes off to you.... thank you so much for this heart warming write.... it reminded me of my father.... thank you...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

aww IP your words aree always so lovely, i can't imagine how it is for people that have lost a paren.. read more
Inject Positivity

8 Years Ago

well i believe it's people like you who encourages us to gain that strength along with God...
hcarson

8 Years Ago

aww thank you IP, so ddo you with your lovely words and positive outlook :)
Beautiful poem. Think I'll go visit Mom tomorrow. She's 92.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

Thank you robert...wow 92... Thats quite an age, bet she has some tales to tell!!
Robert Parlange

8 Years Ago

Yup. I'll be writing more about Mom and Dad.
hcarson

8 Years Ago

Look forward to you sharing them, i enjoy reading your things, your a lovely writer :)
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Gee
Really well done,this will ring true for so many."A mothers passing" was written from a male perspective (me) so is a more general view rather than that of mother/daughter.If you get a mo have a peek and see what you think.Again,well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

I love your poem, best i read so far!!!
Gee

8 Years Ago

Thanks,I'm flattered (might even blush!)
hcarson

8 Years Ago

I mean it, it is fantastic! Your a damn good writer!
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V
Beautifully sad poem. It's brave to write about something that might hurt or contain sad memories. But nicely done, not too depressive but a light sense of letting go and musing about the past.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

8 Years Ago

It was an awkward one as i havent lost my mother (thankfully) but a lady mentioned putting one up fo.. read more
V

8 Years Ago

Ah ok. Well, nicely done, anyway. I'm glad you didn't lose her.

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hcarson
hcarson

cardiff, barry, United Kingdom



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