Stars

Shining like opar at first sight

Looking apon the stars at night

Looking at how they dance through the night

Wishing you can see your lover at first sight

Then you will dance with your lover all through the stars like light

Author's Note

I made this when I was randomly singing words in words in my head
Please review. =)

Reviews

[FelicityAllona]

yeah!! i also think of that every time i look at the stars in the infinite horizon..i wish he would come to take my hand and dance with me :)

-i'll put this in my library :)

i love this poem :)

[kingblaq]

This piece has that tendency to wet the eyes and make you long for that special someone, but you need to build on these random thoughts.
This piece has potentials, explore it