Always there

 

always there                   
Category: Writing and Poetry

                                                       
Clear sky,
cloudy sky,
sun is always there,
just sometimes it hides.

starry night,
dark night,
sun is still there,
just on the other side.

smile on my face,
frown on my face,
I am always here,
just at times to others unaware.

opened eyes,
closed eyes,
yet inside always seeing,
my hope,...always there.

 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very creative flow.. great message that life is full of pain, love, life and hope.. I can relate to this very much.. we have to embrace and fight through the clouds to find the light.. embrace darkness and rain.. they are merely elements which make love and living to the fullest that much more enjoyable when the sun is out!!! Thank you so much for your inspiration... just because we can't see the stars or sun on a cloudy day doesn't mean they aren't there!!! =)

[cest la vie]

My mood of late.. yes, hope is always there.
I love this. Actually, I think it's my favorite of yours.

[Lydia]

Beautiful and creative. Loved it.

[Gheeneil]

This is an eye-opener for those who are too blind to see things. Short it may be, yet, it speaks so much.

[Shanna (Renae)]

Upbeat and spacious. Love the opposites!

Maybe "frown on my face", would be better than "smile not on my face." That line seemed a bit akward.

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Beautifully penned. Simple, honest, insightful and very wise.

[fallendemonofmercy]

no matter the expressions and no matter how they are percieved never denies the truth of the unknown.
wonderful - for a beginner - :p

[Tim Allison]

I enjoyed reading this. I liked the format and the choice of words you used in describing the imagery. You led the reader through a thought process that brought them to a simple truth at the end. The sun is always there, whether we see it or not. Likewise there lie many mysteries in the hearts of others that cannot be seen. As always, take care, and thanks for sharing. =o)

[just is]

opened eyes,
closed eyes,
yet inside always seeing,
my hope,...always there.

Love these lines here, so true too, this is a wonderful write.

[Jolly Jake]

I like this. Its a simple reminder that you have to look past the appearances and see whats really going on. I've heard that you can't live waiting for the sun to come out, you just have to learn to dance in the rain.

Good writing.