Leap of Faith

I've no idea where I'm going, no idea where we'll land.

If you promise me
You’ll never look back
Then take my hand
And walk with me
Through this forest
I’ve no idea where I’m going
No clue where we’ll land
Just a feeling that no matter what
It’s better than what we have
So take a chance with me now
A huge leap of faith
Trust me that we’ll make it
To some new kind of place

Author's Note

Comments and crit always welcome <3

Reviews

[LoLo]

Short, simple, sweet. The Triple S's lol. I loved it, honestly it's the perfect poem for me to have read at this moment in my life. There is a certain glow that seems to lure one to the end of that path you speak of, a sort of "Let go, let God" thing? Or "What choices do we have? We could go our seperate ways, or we could live the rest of our lifes never knowing if taking that leap of faith would have brought peace to our lives. If we both believe, we can make our love last a lifetime.." That's what I got out of it. Thanks for sharing.

[Marlena]

Gaaaahhhh this was so cute xD I just loved it, especially "No clue where we’ll land
Just a feeling that no matter what
It’s better than what we have" For some reason it reminds me of Kingdom Hearts XD Great work :D

[Tate Morgan]

I like the idea of placing ones trust in another

[Adelia Alighieri]

I'd rather copy LoLo's comment, it just says it all.
Triple S's :P Standing 'O'

[happy girl]

That was beautiful!!! The title pulled me in, and I read it, and was I was intriged. It had a beautiful flow, wonderful rhythm and a good vocabulary