This Dance Floor Will Be Our Stage

Teenage hearts beat
Faster, faster
Music pounding
Louder, louder
Raise your hands
And swing your hips
Strobe lights blinking
Faster, faster
Teenage voices sing
Louder, louder
Take my hand
Take me away
This dance floor
Will be our stage

Author's Note

....This is really just my procrastination on making sweet sixteen invitations. Comments and crit would be lovely :3

Reviews

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Nice flow
I like the beat in it
Good luck with the invitations =)

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. really nice.. great flow.. short but full of action! It's fresh and makes me want to go out dancing right now!!! Love the picture as it sure makes the setting for this.. if you enter a contest .. hope you win! =)

[Aekmy]

Did you submit this into the Music and Dance contest?

[puppyLove]

I love it!!
I really like dancing and this is what its all about.
awesome !!

[Ophelia]

I like this. It's fun, and has a beat to it. I can imagine some Blaqk Audio-esque music going with this. Very fun to read. And I'm sure you had a great time writing it!

[Marlena]

Kind of reminds me of that panic at the disco song that came out a while ago, I like it tho XD

[Vitamin A]

Chaotic and full of life. This is really cute.

[fotini]

wow!!!!
so sweet and so fresh!!!!
full of motion!!!
btw good luck with your sweet sixteen invitations!!!!!