Me and You

The beat moving though our bodies
The music swelling in our souls
Swaying endlessly to a tune all our own
The world fell away
It was just me and you

 

The dance floor wasn’t there
We were dancing on air
In a world all our own
The crowd wasn’t there
It was just me and you

 

Voices rose around
We didn’t hear a sound
But the beat of one another’s hearts
The song wasn’t there
It was just me and you

 

Author's Note

This poem makes me happy :)

Reviews

[a]

Too simple, trivial. Work with this piece, my friend, enhance it, remove the unnecessary words, feel it through. This poem has potential, it just needs more emotion, use at least one powerful mean of expression.
Thank you for sharing!

[.]

Made me happy too
Depicts how when you're in your lover's embrace, the music flows and you forget about everything else
Well done!

[Aekmy]

Awe, this poem makes me happy too. :)

Great job. Keep writing :D

[bluessadmood]

God there is so much beauty here ,what lovely thoughts,what imagination ,lovely images..
Music swelling in our souls..Swaying endlessly to a tune all our own
The world fell away and its just you and me
Dance floor was not there ,we were dancing in the air
The world all our own..the crowd just was not there
Voices rose around,but never hear a sound
the beat is in our hearts,no song ever there
Its just you and me and we dance
to our music,and the world is not there
How i loved this ,really great writing
lovely write