Falling

I try to stop the tears, I try to reach for your hand, but you're too far away and I just keep on falling.

I try
And I try
To erase
All the tears
Falling from these
Eyes
I try
And I try
To reach
For your hand
But you’re too
Far a w a y
And I can’t
See you
In this vast
Darkness
And as I see
You fade to grey
I feel myself
Keep on
F
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            L
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         Down.

Author's Note

....I was bored and this kinda just popped into my head. Comments and crit appreciated. ^^

Reviews

[Suhana]

Very apart and great work.

[Kaitlyn]

That's cool and I love the wordplay. I really like the falling vown part at the ending. Awesome, and I love ALL of your work!

[Aekmy]

Very very cool. I love the word play :3

[Marlena]

Cute ^^ I like the emphasis on the words. :)

[Mintwhiskers]

i like it i t was pretty good u could add a little more detail but other than that it was good

[Winter Poison]

It seems a little choppy to me, like the lines are too short or something. But the formatting is very nice. =3