Puppeteer

Hand me your heart
On a silver platter
And watch what I
Can make it do

 

Put your life
In my hands
And watch what I
Can do to you

 

Give me the strings
I’m the puppeteer
And I control
All you do here

 

Give me your eyes
Give me your ears
I’ll be all you
See or hear

 

Step on my stage
Do as I say
You took your soul
And gave it away

 

Give me the strings
I’m the puppeteer
And I control
All you do here

Author's Note

Written on a whim. Comments and crit appreciated. <3

Reviews

[Alexander Z. Anthony]

Haha! perfect! Another dark and yet, fun poem. I love these.
Great rhyme scheme, quite elaborate.
Job well done!

[Kaitlyn]

I like your rhyming scheme here too and I love this poem very much! I especially enjoyed
"Hand me your heart
On a silver platter
And watch what I
Can make it do"
It is very powerful, and very good!

[Aekmy]

Very cool sounding. I like this.Good job! :D

[Abigail Lee]

To tell you the truth I didn't expect much when I saw the position of your stanzas. I stereotyped and for that I apologize; but that aside I enjoyed this poem very much. It wasn't what I was expecting from the title, but I am glad it wasn't what I had in mind. This was very powerful and it commanded my attention right off the bat. I liked your rhyme scheme very much and I'm glad I read this. Well done.

[Winter Poison]

It reminds me of BB. Sexy. =D I like, very very much so.