The Dawn Always Comes

I can hear you
Only in my memories
And see you
In my dreams
And I lie to rest
Each night
Longing for your
Tender touch
Waiting for
Your voice
And each night
I rejoice
When you
Come to me
But the dawn
Always comes
And steals you away
And I’m left
To survive
Another day
Alone

Author's Note

...Comments? Crit? Anything? :3

Reviews

[ttom]

Well done . I like the way you express so much with so few words, great format.

[Amalie]

awww it was sweet :3 i liked it and you are verry right Howl-ey-poo the dawn always coems :3 great job liked it a lot

[John McGrael]

i like it

i would make another stanza after the line, "when you/ come to me"
thats my constructive criticism

[Wingless Angel of Dream..]

XD oh my gosh, it came out so well!! i personally liked the random... whats the word.. prompt from 12 at night XD! btw u love the message though its kinda really sad (oxymoron much?) but overall its a good poem, i also like the...format of the poem to!

[Marlena]

So pretty ^^

[Aekmy]

I Like This One Much Better Than The Other One You Just Posted. I'm Truly Sorry, But The Subject Was A Little Iffy For Me. You Know, It Being About The Devil And Everything. D:

This Is Pretty. I Like It. :DD