Your Eyes

I thought there was something lovely
about your eyes
but it turns out all I saw
were your shady little lies.

 

Author's Note

It popped into my head. Thoughts?

Reviews

[Suhana]

Short and awesome. It hold a very deep meaning behind it.

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Been there....always trust first impressions...by looking straight in to the eyes. Good write her. Short but cool.
Thanks
FG

[Marlena]

Nifty, I like short little drabbles like this :D

[Aekmy]

Dun dun dun
Very cool

[ruth]

wow... its short but I love it!
im going to add it on my favs..
-ruth