Fall Apart

There was once a time when we spoke in perfect rhyme....everything has fallen apart.

There was once a time
When we spoke in perfect rhyme
Now I’m picking up my broken heart
Everything has fallen apart

 

There was once a place
Where all I saw was your face
What was once a work of art
Everything has fallen apart

 

Once I held you up high
Built you a castle in the sky
We had such a lovely start
Everything has fallen apart

 

There once was a time
Everything has fallen apart

Author's Note

Kyrielle Sonnet. AabB ccbB ddbB AB.
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[Marlena]

Awesome ^^ Sad but sweet

[Winter Poison]

Creative, depressing, and simple - I love it!